Changestone v 1 is Complete!

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I finished editing my cookbook, so I wanted to do a quick revision for “Changestone”. Upon rereading v 0, I found that the thing I needed to change the most was the fact that the voice was wooden. I was just telling what was happening without any personality or emotion. Hopefully I got that across this time. To increase interest, I also added in a bit of action. Because with all the mentioning of pumas I did, I had to have my narrator face off against one. 🙂

Now to see if this story makes sense to anybody else. 🙂

  • Started: August 18, 2014 9:04 am
  • Finished: August 18, 2014 1:14 pm
  • Number of breaks to feed/clothe kids: at least 3
  • 1,127 words
  • 112% the size of v 0.

About Annaliese

Author of the fantasy short stories "Infant Insomnia" and "Curelom Riders." Also a mother of three, one of which has outgrown allergies to gluten, and dairy, though he still reacts to nuts.
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2 Responses to Changestone v 1 is Complete!

  1. Bahaha I love that you included a metric for feeding and clothing kids! I hope I’ll be able to find my own writing balance after we have our baby.

    • Annaliese says:

      Just wanted to make sure it didn’t look like I was only writing 250 words per hour. 🙂 When I had only one kid, I made nap time my sacred writing time. Now, I just have to deal with getting interrupted.

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