I finished editing my cookbook, so I wanted to do a quick revision for “Changestone”. Upon rereading v 0, I found that the thing I needed to change the most was the fact that the voice was wooden. I was just telling what was happening without any personality or emotion. Hopefully I got that across this time. To increase interest, I also added in a bit of action. Because with all the mentioning of pumas I did, I had to have my narrator face off against one. 🙂
Now to see if this story makes sense to anybody else. 🙂
- Started: August 18, 2014 9:04 am
- Finished: August 18, 2014 1:14 pm
- Number of breaks to feed/clothe kids: at least 3
- 1,127 words
- 112% the size of v 0.
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Bahaha I love that you included a metric for feeding and clothing kids! I hope I’ll be able to find my own writing balance after we have our baby.
Just wanted to make sure it didn’t look like I was only writing 250 words per hour. 🙂 When I had only one kid, I made nap time my sacred writing time. Now, I just have to deal with getting interrupted.